The Storymakers

 โ€œWhy canโ€™t I read one of the books which have magic and quests in it!โ€ asked Aastha as her brows scrunched up enough to let her mom know this was going to be another of their futile arguments. โ€œYou will understand when you grow up โ€“ when itโ€™s time for you to understand.โ€ she looked…


 โ€œWhy canโ€™t I read one of the books which have magic and quests in it!โ€ asked Aastha as her brows scrunched up enough to let her mom know this was going to be another of their futile arguments.

โ€œYou will understand when you grow up โ€“ when itโ€™s time for you to understand.โ€ she looked away from cleaning the layer of dust settled on the fan blades.

โ€œBut they have no magic, mom! or, or people going on quests! What do I do with knowing 600 types of animals!? You know, I am going to turn thirteen next week, right?โ€

โ€œWell, darling, for this week you are still not thirteen. So, off you go now, itโ€™s your vacations!โ€ 

Aasthaโ€™s brow scrunched up further like a bottle cap about to blow off and she was about to walk away when she heard her mother say โ€œโ€“ OK, fine, go to Nani she will tell you a few stories.โ€ Aastha made a grunting noise but knew better than to push mother any further. As she walked to her Naniโ€™s room from the back end of the house, her mind wandered.

Inside the hut, she saw her Nani digging up the soil from one of the little potted plants, Aastha took a spare scalpel of her own and started doing the same. 

โ€œWhat happened? Did you two get in a row again?โ€

โ€œItโ€™s always the same with her.โ€ said Aastha, giving a rather hard blow into the roots of the little plant in front of her. 

โ€œI donโ€™t understand this stupid rule! All my friends are reading fantasy and magic and what not and here I am, reading boring abacus or mental mathโ€™s or rules of philosophy.  I donโ€™t even get half of them.โ€ 

โ€œNoniโ€ replied Nani, her movements unlike Aastha were soft and swift. โ€œNoniโ€ she began again โ€œyou will understand, Da and Ma are only trying to do what they think is best for you. But donโ€™t you worry, this year you will turn thirteen and nothing can stop you then.โ€ replied Nani with her kind and knowing smile.

โ€œNowโ€ said Nani โ€œwhere were we? You know, each of these summer feels longer and longer.โ€ 

โ€œOn the witch in the hut, Nani!โ€ replied Aastha.

โ€œRight, yes, yes. And so, the story goesโ€ started Nani with a flair and expression that took Aashta to the world of stories, being swept away โ€“ literally. 

Although none of it could be seen by little Aastha, in the backyard Naniโ€™s story was starting to come alive – the little hut in the story started to develop in the open as if the space was there, just for it. A well popped up in a space big enough for a well. Next came the witchโ€™s little hat, then a big bowl with smoke brewing. Lastly came the witch, โ€œWohoo!โ€ she cried and looked all around like a new born child. But soon she started to stir the bowl like a character in a play doing its part. As the story ended, Aastha cried with a big grin plastered on her face. โ€œNani you are the best!!โ€ 

โ€œI loved, loved, loved the storyโ€ said she, her eyes had become slits and mouth showed all her teeth except the two in middle. In the backyard, all seemed to have returned back to normal, like there was nothing to begin with. 

โ€œCome letโ€™s go to the main house now, Nani.โ€ holding her Naniโ€™s wrist, Aastha walked towards the main building. Grandma was tall as the thirteen-year-old herself, both of them moved slowly each trying to keep pace with the other.

โ€œAasthaaโ€ a voice called out just then. Mother was peeping from the main buildingโ€™s second floor window. Unlike in the city, here in her hometown the voice was clearer, easier to hear. All the voices were. 

She looked disappointed. Aastha knew what was this for, she was once again late for her evening class but after what she just experienced it did not bother her much. As they entered the house, Nani had to go to the washroom and so she went ahead while Aastha took to the main living room area. 

โ€œHello Aastha, how are you today? Come have a seat.โ€ said the teacher with her notebook and a smile that Aastha did not like at all. It was the kind of smile adults have when they know about you than they were letting on.

โ€œHello, I am doing fine.โ€ 

 โ€œSo, dear, did you meet any of your friends today?โ€

โ€œNo.โ€ ten, nineโ€ฆAastha counted in her head

โ€œWhat about the creatures?โ€

โ€œWhat creaturesโ€ repeatโ€ฆten, nine 

โ€œRight, okay. Good. So, how was your day?โ€

Aastha kept her eyes down and her hands folded. The teacher was clever.

โ€œDid you meet your Nani today, dear?โ€

โ€œNoโ€ as her eyes moved towards the photo of her Nani hung on the wall with golden flowers over it, Aastha repeated, firmly โ€œNo. I didnโ€™t.โ€

โ€œThatโ€™s good.โ€ said the teacher and added โ€œbecause even if you did, you can tell me. We can discuss more on it, if you feel like it.โ€

โ€œOkay.โ€ said Aastha and kept mum.

The rest of the session went as did all previous sessions since last summer. Finally, her mother and Aastha watched the teacher go, โ€œWho put those potted plants there?โ€ asked the mother, as they were both now looking through the second-floor window.

โ€œNani did.โ€

โ€œNoniโ€ said the mother, in a dejected tone.

Aastha was confused now, the class was over and she did not understand โ€“ did mom think she was going to be late to the next class too? Then she looked at the hut and thought maybe she will. 


8 responses to “The Storymakers”

  1. Loved it!

  2. DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!

    1. Hehe thankyou !

  3. Raisha avatar
    Raisha

    Wow it was so lovely! The turn in the end was really unexpected

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      Thankyou so much, Raisha ๐Ÿฅฐ

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    Maunica

    Damn. That ending took me by surprise! Very well written srish โค๏ธ

    1. Srishti avatar
      Srishti

      Thankyou so much, Maurice and thankyou so much for reading!

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