I FEEL YOU

One fine morning, Justin and Stewart are walking on the footpath, going on their way to their college. Stewart is talking about their practical examinations and about a dream which he got last night. In that, their college principal suspended him because he has done malpractice in his practical exams. After listening to this, Justin…


One fine morning, Justin and Stewart are walking on the footpath, going on their way to their college. Stewart is talking about their practical examinations and about a dream which he got last night. In that, their college principal suspended him because he has done malpractice in his practical exams. After listening to this, Justin began to laugh and after some time, Justin also said, โ€œStewart I too got a dream yesterday. In that ‘Stacy’ was like a dream girl. I love her, but she doesn’t recognize it. Last night I feel her in each and every second.โ€ Then, Stewart asked him, โ€œcan you explain how you feel her?โ€ To that Justin said, โ€œI feel each and everything of her, by exposing a small shy face. Justin starts to explain his dream.

When I’m sleeping on my bed. Slowly my name was whispered in my ears with a sweet voice. Then I opened my eyes, and I saw a girl who was continuously whispering my name as โ€˜Justin…. Justin….โ€™ I moved towards her, there I saw a charming smile on her face. “I feel the way she smiles. I feel her lips when they touch each other. I feel her nose when it touches me while I try to kiss her. I feel her cheeks touching my face. I feel her ears when she moves her hair behind the ears. I feel the way she rubs her eyes. I feel the way she locks her hair. I feel her long hair which touches me that’s eventually kissing my face. I feel the way she rubs her neck slowly. I feel her body when she cuddles me. I feel her legs when they touch mine. I feel her feet actually touching my cheek. I feel her shy sometimes, every time and a while. I feel it when she looks at me when I’m not looking at her. I feel the air when she passes by me. I feel the smell when she sits beside me. I feel her warm air when she is breathing out”

โ€œWait!…wait! Are you talking about our classmate Stacy?โ€ asked Stewart.While Justin was narrating his dream, along with Stewart there is another girl standing there. Justin was consciously not aware of that, as he was drifting through his dream. When he looked back, he realized that the girl is none other than Stacy.

Then Stacy whispered Justin’s name the same as he listened in his dream. Justin was speechless. He was slightly shivering although it was the middle of summer, Stewart said, โ€œCome on mann!! This is the right time to propose to her. Tell each and everything which is there in your heart. I’m leaving now, You guys continue.โ€

With a shivering tone Justin said, โ€œStacy I’m extremely sorry about that, I’m not supposed to think like that I… โ€œ

โ€œEnough! Justin, Just tell me what you feel about me?โ€

Justin replied, โ€œStacy, I love your lips when they’re red, with a wild desire. Your lips are so soft and red that makes me think of kissing you and biting your red lips adding red blood to your already red lips making them hotter than ever. This picture has stuck in my head. I love your eyes when they shine with a spark. I love my eyes when you look into them. I love my name, when you whisper it. I’ll take your pain and give my love that no one could. I love that; I love you, I’ll never stop loving you. I love your each and every feeling, I FEEL YOU.” 

Stacy smiles and cuddles him and says, โ€œI love you too!โ€

Justin kisses Stacy. Next week they get married and all their desires are fulfilled. 

LOVE IS NOT A DESIRE, LOVE IS AN ETERNITY.


55 responses to “I FEEL YOU”

  1. Venkat avatar
    Venkat

    โ™ฅ๏ธBeautiful Dream Which Comes Trueโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ

  2. Joshi.G avatar
    Joshi.G

    Great work ra madhu..๐Ÿ‘
    Good feel in the story..

  3. Veena avatar

    It was really touching ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  4. Veena avatar

    It was really touching ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  5. Denuka Malla avatar
    Denuka Malla

    At the touch of love, everyone becomes a writer!!!

    U are one among too! Great one๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ‘

  6. Nice story buddy
    Keep it up
    I really enjoyed it ra

  7. Lathik avatar
    Lathik

    A fine story โค๏ธ.
    Keep up the work ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿปโฃ๏ธ.

  8. Jyothsna avatar
    Jyothsna

    Just loved itttโค

  9.  avatar
    Anonymous

    The story is too good โค
    Appreciate ๐Ÿ‘
    Keep up the good work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  10. Partha avatar
    Partha

    The story is too goodโค
    Appreciable ๐Ÿ‘
    Keep up the good work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  11.  avatar
    Anonymous

    Great one๐Ÿ’“Mr. romantic

  12. Ashmi avatar

    Great one๐Ÿ’“
    Mr. Romantic ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ™Œkeep going

  13. Ashmi avatar

    Great one๐Ÿ’“
    Mr. Romantic ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ™Œkeep going

  14. Lahir avatar

    Nice ra.l loved it

  15. Lahir avatar

    Nice ra.l loved it

  16. Lokesh sadhu avatar
    Lokesh sadhu

    Super ra shivam๐Ÿ˜
    Manchi story

  17. Lokesh sadhu avatar
    Lokesh sadhu

    Super ra shivam๐Ÿ˜
    Manchi story
    Kalalu kanandi shakatam chesukondi๐Ÿ˜œ

  18. Sonali avatar
    Sonali

    Good story ..
    Keep it up โค

  19. Shilisidda Pujari avatar
    Shilisidda Pujari

    Nice story bro โค๏ธ

  20. Pradyumna Patrutha avatar
    Pradyumna Patrutha

    Nice story..good feel

  21. Pallavi shal avatar
    Pallavi shal

    Nice Shivam ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜I really feel it โค๏ธ

  22. Pallavi shal avatar
    Pallavi shal

    Nice Shivam ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜I really feel it โค๏ธ

  23. Sandy avatar

    Super madhu good feel in the story nice narration

  24. Arjun pradhyuman avatar
    Arjun pradhyuman

    This is the story that everyone feels ๐Ÿ™‚. You come up with a basic story that lasts foreverโฃ๏ธ.
    Hope it would happen for me๐Ÿ˜..

  25. Prabhu avatar
    Prabhu

    Good feel bro nice โค

  26.  avatar
    Anonymous

    Nice story brother ๐ŸŒš๐ŸŒโค๏ธ

  27. Khushi patel avatar
    Khushi patel

    Nice story brother ๐ŸŒš๐ŸŒโค๏ธ
    Keep it up ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’•

  28. Janardhan avatar
    Janardhan

    So lovely story I loved it โค๏ธโœจ

  29. NIKHIL avatar
    NIKHIL

    Really it’s so, good story. I loved it .. โค๏ธ๐ŸŒ 

  30. yuvraj avatar
    yuvraj

    luved the way u told it brother gud oneโค๏ธ

  31. Very interesting …. cute sweet, short love story.
    Want to read many more like these..verynice keep going boy..
    Very nicee

    1. Feel good story ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š broโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

  32. Pujitha avatar
    Pujitha

    Wow wow wow wow wow wow superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

  33. Pujitha avatar
    Pujitha

    Wow wow wow wow wow wow superrrrrrrrrrrrr all the best my dear little broooooo

  34. Harshitha avatar
    Harshitha

    Excellent broo …..
    Story is astounding
    Keep it up๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  35. K. Jyoti avatar
    K. Jyoti

    Literally the above story has a wonderful composition and a depth feeling of love…I really loved it ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜

  36. Astha Singh avatar
    Astha Singh

    Wooww it’s gooodd

  37. Hareesh dev avatar
    Hareesh dev

    Wow ๐Ÿ˜ what a story it is!
    Especially that proposal scene
    He describes each and every part of her face .Wow that’s really amazing โค
    I think you are in love with someone lucky girl ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Any way keep it up bro๐Ÿ™‚

  38. Deepu avatar

    ๐Ÿ˜ short story but โค๏ธ Iloved it ๐Ÿ˜ป my dear keep going ๐Ÿค

  39. Dikshu avatar
    Dikshu

    ๐Ÿ˜‰ gud feeling ๐Ÿค— the line are too good ๐Ÿ™‚

  40.  avatar
    Anonymous

    Classic ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜‰

  41. Vijay avatar

    Classic ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜‰

  42. Deekshitha avatar
    Deekshitha

    Wow….๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐ

  43. Jeevan avatar
    Jeevan

    so good ๐Ÿคฉ

  44. Meena avatar

    Nice Shivam ๐Ÿ˜Œ

  45. Too good …

    ๐Ÿ˜Š keep going

  46. Gud story with a beatiful ending
    Keep going

  47.  avatar
    Anonymous

    Very good one..! Vocabulary is too good

  48.  avatar
    Anonymous

    Amazing story ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿฅฐ

  49. sai teja avatar
    sai teja

    story was quite awsome ra!
    Thank you for sharing your heartfelt story. I’m touched and my heart is so full!!!…..

    never mark an end for ur writing!. brother()!.

  50.  avatar
    Anonymous

    Feel good ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’• mowa

  51. Aishwarya avatar
    Aishwarya

    Amazing story shivam
    Waiting for another ..โค๏ธstory

  52. Superb Story man๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ”ฅ… I loved it

  53. I really Feel this story… I was connected to it๐Ÿ’ฏโค๏ธ

  54. Ohh great story โค๏ธโค๏ธ

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